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jujuanne

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The line chart demonstrates the figure for citizens in Australia who were born in many parts of the world, namely UK, Total, Asia, and other over a period of 25 years from 1976.
Overall, it is obvious that while the amounts of people who were born in Total and Asia witnessed upward trends, there were a slight decreased in those figure for UK and the others over the given timescale. It is also evident that a considerable growth was experienced from 1976 to 2011in this figure.
The proportion of people who were born in Total decreased gradually from 24% to around 20% between 1976 and 2001, before increasing in the end of the period. The figure for people were born in UK drop dramatically from 1976 to 2011, at 5%.
A steeply increased was seen from 4% to 15% between 1976 and 2011 in the percentage of Australian people who were born in Asia. There was a significant drop in the consumption of inhabitants in Australia were born in the others from 11% to 10%, 1976 and 1996, before rising to 14% in the next ten years, followed by a drop of 2% from 2006 to the end of the given period.
 

englishgeek

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Can you please add the question? It is kind of hard to check your answer if we don't know the question. Thanks!