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Writing task 1 : Average monthly temperatures in three cities.

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jedah

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The line graph shows and compares the average monthly temperatures in the three famous cities of the world, namely, Athens, Barcelona and Sydney.
The hottest month of the year in both Athens and Barcelona was August with an average monthly temperature of 31 degree Celsius and 27 degree Celsius, respectively. In contrast, the hottest months of the year in Sydney were December and January with an average monthly temperature of 27 degree Celsius.

The hottest average monthly temperature recorded throughout the year was in Athens during August with an average monthly temperature of 31 degree Celsius. Moreover, the coldest average monthly temperature was recorded in Barcelona during the month of January and December with an average monthly temperature of 7 degree Celsius.

Overall, the average monthly temperature of Sydney peaked in the months of December and January while that of Athens and Barcelona peaked in the month of August. In addition to that, the coldest average monthly temperature of Sydney was 14 degree Celsius in the month of July while that of Athens and Barcelona was that of 8 and 7 degree Celsius, respectively, in the months of December and January .
 

englishgeek

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The line graph shows and compares the average monthly temperatures in the three famous cities of the world, namely, Athens, Barcelona and Sydney.
The hottest month of the year in both Athens and Barcelona was August with an average monthly temperature of 31 degree Celsius and 27 degree Celsius, respectively. In contrast, the hottest months of the year in Sydney were December and January with an average monthly temperature of 27 degree Celsius.

The hottest average monthly temperature recorded throughout the year was in Athens during August with an average monthly temperature of 31 degree Celsius. Moreover, the coldest average monthly temperature was recorded in Barcelona during the month of January and December with an average monthly temperature of 7 degree Celsius.

Overall, the average monthly temperature of Sydney peaked in the months of December and January while that of Athens and Barcelona peaked in the month of August. In addition to that, the coldest average monthly temperature of Sydney was 14 degree Celsius in the month of July while that of Athens and Barcelona was that of 8 and 7 degree Celsius, respectively, in the months of December and January .

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