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hannie

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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The period from 1900 to 2000 saw an increase in global water use. Water was mostly used for Agriculture,rising dramatically from 5000 to 3000 over this period. The figures for industrial and domestic use were far lower at around 100 km and remained stable until 1950, before growing to 1200 and 500 respectively. From the second table, we can see that people in Brazil had more water consumption (359 m)than Democratic Republic of Congo in 2000, with 176 million population and 26500 irrigated land. By contrast, 5.2 million residents in Democratic Republic of Congo only have 8 m water consumption per person and 100 km land needed to irrigate.

To sum up, global water use experienced a significant increase in three sectors. And people in these two countries had large difference in water consumption per person can be attribued to the irrigated land.
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englishgeek

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The period from 1900 to 2000 saw an increase in global water use. Water was mostly used for agriculture, rising dramatically from around 5000 to 3000 square kilometers over this period. The figures for industrial and domestic use were far lower at around 100 square kilometers and remained stable until 1950, before growing to 1200 and 500 respectively. From the second table, we can see that people in Brazil had more water consumption (359 cubic meters) than the Democratic Republic of Congo in 2000, with 176 million population and 26,500 square kilometers of irrigated land. By contrast, 5.2 million residents in the Democratic Republic of Congo only had 8 cubic meters of water consumption per person and 100 square kilometers of land which needed to irrigate.

To sum up, global water use experienced a significant increase in three sectors, and people in these two countries had a large difference in water consumption per person which can be attributed to the amount of irrigated land.
 

englishgeek

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You really need to be careful with the measurements in questions like this. You can't just write "100", you need to give the measurements, like "100 square meters" or "100 m2".