The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feat

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A glance at the chart reveals British emgration to other countries of a course of four years from 2004 to 2007
Overall it is apparent that Australia has the highest number of British migrants. Wow the pictures are not very interested in moving our to the United States
Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that all countries except Australia have no more than 40,000 British immigrants. Having started at 41000 British immigrants in 2004, this number shooted up considerably in next 3 years from 2004 to 2007 and reached the highest point at 50,000 British immigrants in 2006. Alonzo at this number decreased by 20% to 40000 in 2007, Australian stew hot the number of immigrants more twice that in New Zealand and USA. A stately downward trend was seen in Spain, with slight decrease in next 3 years. While the number of British immigrants in France varied consistently during the whole period, with peak in 2005 and a low in 2007.
 

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A glance at the chart reveals British emigration to other countries of over a course of four years from 2004 to 2007.

Overall it is apparent that Australia has the highest number of British migrants. Wow the pictures are not very interested in moving our to the United States.(1)

Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that all countries except Australia have no more than 40,000 British immigrants. Having started at 41,000 British immigrants in 2004, this number shooted shot up considerably in next 3 years from 2004 to 2007 and reached the highest point at 50,000 British immigrants in 2006. Alonzo(2) at this number decreased by 20% to 40,000 in 2007, Australian stew hot(3) the number of immigrants more twice that in New Zealand and USA. A stately slight downward trend was seen in Spain, with slight decrease in next 3 years. While the number of British immigrants in France varied consistently during the whole period, with a peak in 2005 and a low in 2007.

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(1) You shouldn't use wow in this kind of essay. Also, you shouldn't be giving your opinion about the graph.

(2) What is is this?

(3) What do you mean?

Make sure to put commas in the numbers for every 1,000 which makes it easier to read.

There were a few words that you used which I had no idea what you meant. Perhaps you could clarify further.