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Renata
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Task-2 The Internet has transformed the way information is shared



The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest? The internet has become popular among people of all ages and has changed our lifestyle completely as this makes everything easier for human. Besides these positive impacts, it is creating more serious issues that did not prevalent in earlier generations. This essay will outline the problems associated with internet and suggest ideas to deal with those issues. There are many problems that arise with the development of internet. One is increasing cybercrimes in all over the world. This is because individuals disclose more personal details on social media where there are many people use that information and start to blackmail and take the advantage of them. Furthermore, more people especially younger ones spend too much time on websites and lack face-to-face communication and do not socialize. As a result, they face many challenges such as lack of essential social skills and suffer from mental health because they could not share their problems with other. For instance, many school age children in Nepal face difficulties to socialize with friends at school because they spent their most time on using Facebook and deprived interaction skills. To mitigate these issues, there should be some awareness program regarding the consequences of disclosing more personal information. This helps people to become aware before updating any further details about themselves on any social media. Another solution is parents can encourage their children to engage in outdoor and community activities, which allow them to socialise with other children. Children engage in face-to-face communication with other means that they can learn teamwork and social skills essential for later life. For instance, parents in Germany motivate their young children to take part in community activities to teach them social skills and importance of teamwork. In conclusion, internet has increased the risk of cybercrimes if more personal information is being disclose and youngsters can lack skills necessary for their future. In order to solve these problems, making people aware about detrimental impacts of updating more about themselves and parents can focus on sending children for social events and outdoor games.

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Hi, Renata! You have some good arguments here and demonstrate some nice ability with problem/solution language and general sentence structures.

Here are a few suggestions you can use when revising this essay:

  • Your opening paragraph is quite general. You can identify specific serious issues in the introduction paragraph; then, identifying the few that you will focus on in your essay. This will give the reader a sense that you know exactly what you’re writing about from the beginning.
  • Consider reviewing these grammar areas and applying them to your writing: - articles and which common terms typically use them (for example, ‘the internet’) - gerunds vs. infinitives - auxiliary verb usage/choice

Preply has some great grammar topic on exactly these areas, and there are also some beautifully qualified tutors who specialize in exam essay writing. You will get access to the grammar materials as a Preply student, and your personalized tutor can help you more deeply understand how to apply these skills in your essays.

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