Task 2: Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Jenny

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In modern life, due to the appearance of the internet, it is much easier for people to read online newspapers. Therefore, traditional newspapers become less popular and less vital when compared to the past. It is generally believed that online press might replace the position of conventional newspapers.

First of all, there has been a decline in number of people buying traditional newspapers recently. Obviously, the quantity of those conventional newspapers is decreased in manufacture. Differentiate from these newspapers, online news is accessed by plethora of people every day. Furthermore, online press also adapts to the needs of many people. For instance, an individual could easily read the temporary news without going out to buy a newspaper, which is considered to be less time-consuming and be more convenient.

Moreover, internet also provides a large range of newspapers, which makes people feel more satisfied. There are variety of news for users to read. They would be able to pick the article they want or those which in their favour. Not only that, if a traditional newspaper is produced weekly or monthly after a long process of printing, an online newspaper is regularly written and updated every single day or even every hour such as BBC, the Guardian and CNN. Because of fulfilling the needs of reading at any time, the press become more useful and prevalent among readers.

In conclusion, it is true that the online newspapers surpass those of traditional newspapers. Beside the benefit they are easier and more convenient to access, they also satisfy people by giving many articles at any momment they want.
 

englishgeek

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In modern life, due to the appearance availability of the internet, it is much easier for people to read online newspapers. Therefore, traditional print newspapers have become less popular and less vital when compared to the past. It is generally believed that the online press might replace the position of conventional newspapers.

First of all, there has been a decline in number of people buying traditional newspapers recently. Obviously, the quantity of those conventional newspapers is has decreased in manufacture. Differentiate(?) from these newspapers, online news is accessed by plethora of people every day. Furthermore, online press also adapts to the needs of many people. For instance, an individual could easily read the temporary news without going out to buy a newspaper, which is considered to be less time-consuming and be more convenient.

Moreover, the internet also provides a large range of newspapers, which makes people feel more satisfied. There are variety of news for users to read. They would be able to pick the article they want or those which in their favour. Not only that, if a traditional newspaper is produced weekly or monthly after a long process of printing, an online newspaper is regularly written and updated every single day or even every hour such as BBC, the Guardian and CNN. Because of fulfilling the needs of reading at any time, the press become more useful and prevalent among readers.

In conclusion, it is true that the online newspapers surpass those of traditional newspapers. Beside the benefit they are easier and more convenient to access, they also satisfy people by giving many articles at any moment they want.

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