TASk 2: Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes

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Jenny

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay
taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, many affluent families have a tendency to let their children study at private schools. Therefore, many of them generally believe that it is unnecessary to spend their money on education taxes. However, I argue that parents whose their children studying in private schools do not have to pay taxes for the education system.

To begin with, it would be unfair if people who send their children to the private school were not responsible for spending money on education taxes. Firstly, everyone has to pay for all kinds of taxes for decades. Therefore, some individuals might feel as they are treated unfairly if these people did not take the responsibilities for paying these education taxes. Poor people may not be satisfied if they had to pay more taxes than rich people. Secondly, not only these families, many other people still need to pay for some taxes even if they might not use the services at any time in their lives. For instance, there are many residents who have to pay for health care tax although their health is good and they may not need to go to the hospital for having any treatment. Indeed, it might be inappropriate for these families not to pay for education taxes.

Moreover, by paying for education taxes, people would live in a better life. Because money is spent on education system, it would enhance the quality of teaching and schooling. In addition, more students whose their parents have financial disadvantages could be allowed to go to school. Therefore, there would be more well-educated people in the community and society, which means the nation might develop quickly due to the help of them. In fact, as a resident, everyone need to act in order to make the country grow up significantly.

In conclusion, admittedly, whatever families whose their children learn in private schools or not, paying for education taxes is necessary that everyone are accountable to do.
 

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These days, many affluent families have a tendency to let their children study at private schools. Therefore, many of them generally believe that it is unnecessary to spend their money on pay education taxes. However, I argue that parents whose their children are studying in private schools do not have to pay taxes for the education system.

To begin with, it would be unfair if people who send their children to the private school were not responsible for spending money on education taxes. Firstly, everyone has to pay for all kinds of taxes for decades. Therefore, some individuals might feel as though they are treated unfairly if these people did not take the responsibility for paying these education taxes. Poor people may not be satisfied if they have to pay more taxes than rich people. Secondly, not only these families, many other people still need to pay for some taxes even if they might not use the services at any time in their lives. For instance, there are many residents who have to pay for health care tax although even though their health is good and they may not need to go to the hospital for having any treatment. Indeed, it might be inappropriate for these families not to pay for education taxes.

Moreover, by paying for education taxes, people would live in a better life. Because if money is spent on the education system, it would enhance the quality of teaching and schooling. In addition, more students whose their parents have financial disadvantages could be allowed to go to school. Therefore, there would be more well-educated people in the community and society, which means the nation might develop quickly due to the help of them. In fact, as a resident, everyone needs to act in order to make the country grow up significantly.

In conclusion, admittedly, whatever families whose their whether children learn in private schools or not, paying for education taxes is necessary that everyone are accountable to do pays their fair share.

Good job, well done and thank you for posting your essay here.
 
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Jenny

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These days, many affluent families have a tendency to let their children study at private schools. Therefore, many of them generally believe that it is unnecessary to spend their money on pay education taxes. However, I argue that parents whose their children are studying in private schools do not have to pay taxes for the education system.

To begin with, it would be unfair if people who send their children to the private school were not responsible for spending money on education taxes. Firstly, everyone has to pay for all kinds of taxes for decades. Therefore, some individuals might feel as though they are treated unfairly if these people did not take the responsibility for paying these education taxes. Poor people may not be satisfied if they have to pay more taxes than rich people. Secondly, not only these families, many other people still need to pay for some taxes even if they might not use the services at any time in their lives. For instance, there are many residents who have to pay for health care tax although even though their health is good and they may not need to go to the hospital for having any treatment. Indeed, it might be inappropriate for these families not to pay for education taxes.

Moreover, by paying for education taxes, people would live in a better life. Because if money is spent on the education system, it would enhance the quality of teaching and schooling. In addition, more students whose their parents have financial disadvantages could be allowed to go to school. Therefore, there would be more well-educated people in the community and society, which means the nation might develop quickly due to the help of them. In fact, as a resident, everyone needs to act in order to make the country grow up significantly.

In conclusion, admittedly, whatever families whose their whether children learn in private schools or not, paying for education taxes is necessary that everyone are accountable to do pays their fair share.

Good job, well done and thank you for posting your essay here.
Thank you for your help !
Could I have a small question? Why in this essay, we should use 'even though' rather than 'although' ?