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hannie

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Nowadays, news reported by the media tends to focus on problems and emergency situations rather than on positive developments. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern society, the media is a good source for people to follow the latest news. However, the media always give priority to reporting urgent situations instead of positive development. From my perspective, the benefits of this trend outweigh the dis advantages.

l admit that this trend can bring some benefits to society. Firstly, our environment might become better. By reporting the serious damage of animals habitats and bad air quality might increase people's awareness of protecting environment. Once the masses noticed the emergency situations of improving air condition, many citizens tend to choose more eco-friendly transportation rather than less environmental-friendly ones like private cars which can increase carbon emissions from fumes. Secondly,many dwellers might have healthy lifestyles . Concerning on health can be improved by receiving some diseases such as high blood pressure and heart diseases which caused by having a secondary lifestyle. To take sports as a example, many individuals might choose to do more exercises in their spare time in order to keep fit.

However, reporting good news could also encourage people to protect environment and have healthy lifestyles. This is because they might feel motivated by reporting some good models which could inspire them to imitate. Moreover,l believe there are more problems. The main problem is that society maybe cannot run efficiently. A high proportion of people have stressful lifestyles and suffer from anxiety. Frequent exposure to the neglect development news acts a catalyst to less emotional secure. For example, they are likely to stay home and fear going to work because of the violent events reported by news. As a result, this will decrease efficiency and have bad influence on society.

ln conclusion, this trend has more disadvantages than benefits.
 
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englishgeek

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In modern society, the media is a good source for people to follow the latest news. However, the media always gives priority to reporting urgent situations instead of positive developments. From my perspective, the benefits of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.

l admit that this trend can bring some benefits to society. Firstly, our environment might become better. By reporting the serious damage of animals' habitats and bad air quality, it might increase people's awareness of protecting the environment. Once the masses general population notices the emergency situation of improving air condition, many citizens may tend to choose more eco-friendly transportation rather than less environmental-friendly ones like private cars which can increase carbon emissions from fumes. Secondly, many dwellers might have healthy lifestyles . Concerning on health can be improved by receiving some diseases such as high blood pressure and heart diseases which caused by having a (needs a rewrite) secondary sedentary lifestyle. To Take sports as an example, many individuals might choose to do more exercises in their spare time in order to keep fit.

However, reporting good news could also encourage people to protect the environment and have healthy lifestyles. This is because they might feel motivated by reporting some good models which could inspire them to imitate. Moreover believe there are more problems. The main problem is that society maybe cannot run efficiently. A high proportion of people have stressful lifestyles and suffer from anxiety. Frequent exposure to the neglect development negative news acts a catalyst to less emotional security. For example, they are likely to stay home and fear going to work because of the violent events reported by the news. As a result, this will decrease efficiency and have a bad influence on society.

ln conclusion, this trend has more disadvantages than benefits (probably needs to be a bit longer than this).