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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.

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A group of people believe that Art is an important course for students at school, while others contradict this argument and consider Art education is just of time; furthermore, they think Art subject should neither be taught nor promoted in institutions in this modern age. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions, as well as my perspective.

Art education teaches children "how to imagine?", and imagination is one of the strongest tools in science and technology, which opens gates of discoveries and innovations. Art knowledge is not just about sketching a design on a wall but also about imagination. Nowadays, people have access to unlimited movies, and TV serials and their scripts are written by Artist. Furthermore, Art education provides students opportunities to think beyond horizons and create a new world of imagination full of fascination. Although this kind of information is not factual knowledge; however, it provides scientists with an insight of problems and their solution, for instance, in a movie a virus-like COVID-19 was presented which halt the world and movie script was written by a person who was an Artist and suddenly came up with this kind of issue. Therefore, people believe that Art education should be compulsory for all students.

On the other hand, some parents want their children to focus on science and technology rather than Art. They argue, in the world of science and technology, Art education is just a waste of time as it does not assist students in learning advanced skills, for example, C++, Python, and circuit designing.

To sum up, students should decide whether to study science or Art because both have significance in their respective domains.
 

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A group of people believe that art is an important course for students at school, while others contradict this argument and consider art education is just of time; furthermore, they think art subject should neither be taught nor promoted in institutions in this modern age. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions, as well as my perspective.

Art education teaches children "how to imagine?", and imagination is one of the strongest tools in science and technology, which opens gates of discoveries and innovations. Art knowledge is not just about sketching a design on a wall but also about imagination. Nowadays, people have access to unlimited movies, and TV serials and their scripts are written by artists. Furthermore, Art education provides students opportunities to think beyond horizons and create a new world of imagination full of fascination. Although this kind of information is not factual knowledge; however, it provides scientists with an insight of problems and their solutions, for instance, in a movie a virus-like COVID-19 was presented which halted the world and movie script was written by a person who was an Artist and suddenly came up with this kind of issue. Therefore, people believe that Art education should be compulsory for all students.

On the other hand, some parents want their children to focus on science and technology rather than Art. They argue, in the world of science and technology, Art education is just a waste of time as it does not assist students in learning advanced skills, for example, C++, Python, and circuit designing.

To sum up, students should decide whether to study science or Art because both have significance in their respective domains.

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Art and artists should start with a lower case 'a'. It's the same with other subjects, like math and science. Only languages are capitalized like English, Chinese.

Other than that a good essay.