needs a strong title for my manuscript

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ckara

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Hi,
I struggle to write a strong title for my paper. I wrote it in a couple of different ways, but I think there could be a better title. Here are a couple of titles that I consider. Which one do you think looks better or can you suggest an alternative strong title.
Thank you.

Title 1: "Effect of topical anesthesia on reducing pain associated with mydriatic eye drops during the retinopathy of prematurity screening."

Title 2: "Effect of topical anesthesia on mydriatics-related pain during the retinopathy of prematurity screening."

Title 3: "Should topical anesthesia be applied prior to (or before) mydriatic eye drops during retinopathy of prematurity screening examinations?"

Title 4: "Should topical anesthesia be applied prior to (or before) mydriatic eye drops during screening examinations for retinopathy of prematurity?"