In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Positive or negative situation?

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Jenny

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Nowaydays, in many countries, having the ownership of a house is crucial to some people. And they tend to buy houses rather than rent them. However, owning a house also has both advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, people love to have their own homes for years. For instance, there are many inhabitants who have many properties including houses in some countries like Vietnam. Almost individuals work hard in order to buy their dream houses as they consider them to be achievements. As the significant increase in number of people who want to buy house, there are more and more real estate companies open in order to serve them. It might be vital to be an owner of a home due to the variety of benefits, people could do whatever they want if they were capable to use it.
It is likely that having a house brings a lot of advantages as people could decorate their home if they want. And owners do not have to think about monthly housekeeping money, which is considered to be a relief to some individuals. It also a good way to save money in the long run.
In the other hand, to be an owner of a home also has some drawbacks. Instead of paying housing money, they have to charge for other things such as pay mortgage, loans or even pay a large amount of money on furnitures and other properties. They might have to spend money to rebuild the house if it became downgrade of due to some disasters especially in Japan, for example.
In conclusion, inspite having a house could have many disadvantages, it might be better to own a house due to many benefits. And more and more people would prefer to have their own homes when they were affordable to buy it.
 

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Nowadays, in many countries, having the ownership of a house is crucial to some people, and they tend to buy houses rather than rent them. However, owning a house also has both advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, people love to have their own homes for years. For instance, there are many inhabitants who have many properties including houses in some countries like Vietnam. Almost Most individuals work hard in order to buy their dream houses as they consider it them to be an achievements. As the significant increase in number of people who want to buy a house grows, there are more and more real estate companies opening in order to serve them. It might be vital to be an owner of a home due to the variety of benefits, people could do whatever they want if they were capable to use it.

It is likely that having a house brings a lot of advantages as people could decorate their home if they want. And owners do not have to think about monthly housekeeping money, which is considered to be a relief to some individuals. It also a good way to save money in the long run.

On the other hand, to be an owner of a home, it also has some drawbacks. Instead of paying housing money rent, they have to charge pay for other things such as pay a mortgage, loans or even pay spend a large amount of money on furnitures and other properties. They might have to spend money to rebuild the house if it became downgrade of due to some disasters especially in Japan, for example.

In conclusion, in spite having a house could have many disadvantages, it might be better to own a house due to many benefits. (this sentence needs a rewrite) And more and more people would prefer to have their own homes when they were affordable to buy it. (also needs a rewrite)

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First, I would like to say thank you for joining the forum.

I think you should think of at least three advantages and three disadvantages and make it clear what they are. Not all of your arguments are clear.

In some of your sentences, you are saying what I think is obvious to many people and not really an argument for or against, like when you talk about real estate companies.

For example:

Advantages

- You can decorate it how you want
- Can be a good investment
- Provides security for your family

Disadvantages

- Have to pay a mortgage
- Maintenance costs
- More difficult to move

I hope this helps.
 

Jenny

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May 23, 2021
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Nowadays, in many countries, having the ownership of a house is crucial to some people, and they tend to buy houses rather than rent them. However, owning a house also has both advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, people love to have their own homes for years. For instance, there are many inhabitants who have many properties including houses in some countries like Vietnam. Almost Most individuals work hard in order to buy their dream houses as they consider it them to be an achievements. As the significant increase in number of people who want to buy a house grows, there are more and more real estate companies opening in order to serve them. It might be vital to be an owner of a home due to the variety of benefits, people could do whatever they want if they were capable to use it.

It is likely that having a house brings a lot of advantages as people could decorate their home if they want. And owners do not have to think about monthly housekeeping money, which is considered to be a relief to some individuals. It also a good way to save money in the long run.

On the other hand, to be an owner of a home, it also has some drawbacks. Instead of paying housing money rent, they have to charge pay for other things such as pay a mortgage, loans or even pay spend a large amount of money on furnitures and other properties. They might have to spend money to rebuild the house if it became downgrade of due to some disasters especially in Japan, for example.

In conclusion, in spite having a house could have many disadvantages, it might be better to own a house due to many benefits. (this sentence needs a rewrite) And more and more people would prefer to have their own homes when they were affordable to buy it. (also needs a rewrite)

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First, I would like to say thank you for joining the forum.

I think you should think of at least three advantages and three disadvantages and make it clear what they are. Not all of your arguments are clear.

In some of your sentences, you are saying what I think is obvious to many people and not really an argument for or against, like when you talk about real estate companies.

For example:

Advantages

- You can decorate it how you want
- Can be a good investment
- Provides security for your family

Disadvantages

- Have to pay a mortgage
- Maintenance costs
- More difficult to move

I hope this helps.
Thanks for your feedback