IELTS TASK 1 - Underground Railway Systems

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irfan334590

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The table illustrates satistical information about inauguration years, length of the tracks, and passengers per year of the six different underground railways structures of six different cities . Among the given cities in the table, London railway station is oldest, while latest located in Los Angeles. The London railway route is the longest, however, the number of passengers travel per year are fewer than Paris, and Tokyo, even though, length of the route of these two stations is far less than the London railway track. The length of the route of Tokyo is the shortest, and this railway design was inaugurated in 1981, furthermore, the number of people who travel through this platform are far less than other underground metro systems.

The number of people, traveling by the Tokoyo underground railway are 1927 million per year, while number of movers in Paris and Tokyo subways are 1191 millions an d 775 millions respectively. In Washigton DC, Los Angeles and Kyoto, number of the passengers 144 millions, 50 millions and 45 millions. Length of the tracks of the London , Paris, Tokyo and W Washington DC subways 394 km, 199km,155km and 126km, but Kyoto and Los Angeles rout length is 11km and 28km.
 
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englishgeek

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The table illustrates satistical information about inauguration years the opening year, length of the tracks, and the number of passengers per year of the six different underground railway structures systems of in six different cities. Among the given cities in the table, London's subway system railway station is the oldest, while latest the newest system is located in Los Angeles. The London underground railway route system is the longest, however, the number of passengers travel per year are fewer than Paris, and Tokyo, even though, the length of the route of these two stations is routes are far less than the London railway tracks. The length of the route subway lines of Tokyo in Kyoto are the shortest, and this railway design system was inaugurated in 1981, furthermore, the number of people who travel through utilize this platform system are far less than other underground metro systems.

The number of people, traveling by the Tokoyo underground railway are 1927 million per year, while the number of movers passengers in Paris and Tokyo subways are 1191 million and 775 million respectively. In Washington DC, Los Angeles, and Kyoto, the number of passengers are 144 million, 50 million, and 45 million. The length of the tracks of the London, Paris, Tokyo and W Washington DC subways are 394 km, 199km,155km, and 126km, but Kyoto and Los Angeles rout railway lengths are 11km and 28km.
 

englishgeek

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I think the question could be written better and some of the word choices in the question might have made it confusing.

Such as the use of "length of route". Something like "System length" would be more appropriate. If you have seen a map of the Tokyo subway system you will know that is made up of many lines.


I think you just need to be a bit more careful with vocabulary choice. If a simple word you know is the most appropriate, I would suggest using that, rather than trying to a less common word and getting the usage wrong. For example, "information about inauguration years" is not correct, but this usage is correct "this railway system was inaugurated in 1981".