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hasib12345

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Are these sentences grammatical and natural enough?

▪Don't be curled up, man! This isn't look good on you. You need to protest against injustice because you have a great potential in writing against it. Your writings are like weapons against injustice; every word is like a bullet that creates a hole and pierces the armour of injustice, establishing justice.
 

englishgeek

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Here is a possible rewrite:

Don't get all uptight, man. This doesn't look good for you. You need to protest against injustice because you have great potential in writing against it. Your writing is like a weapon against injustice; every word is like a bullet that creates a hole and pierces the armour of injustice, establishing justice.
 
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