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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the Internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?



In the age of technology advances, individuals are prone to keep an amount of information and knowledge on the internet platforms, instead of containing in some materials such as books. In my point view, this trend may cause more aftermaths rather than benefits it brings to human’s life.

It is non-debatable that there are heaps of upsides in terms of saving data online. First of all, internet users can access to more modern and effective facilities and new methods of learnings through cutting edge technologies. Unlike books, the utilize standard of images and sounds may create a sense of excitement and greater motivation as well as holding learners’ attention while adopting tips that make the process of studying turn to be more efficient. In addition, storing knowledge on the internet is considered to be the cheapest and convenient method. Due to time flexibility, all life of works are permitted to collect their own data immediately from numerous sources such as Google Chrome, Firefox by clicking a mouse.

On the contrary, the ability of online storage may lead to some significant results. It is worth mentioning that nowadays many bad news still dominate a heading line for a whole time. Thus, some fake websites may offer customers with an abundance of inaccurate and unreliable information on the internet which cause detrimental effects on the foundation of instructions. Besides, along with saving data online is also the potential risks of cybercrimes. Because of personal demands, many prestigious websites are willing to violate the invasion of copyright from other different sources that they disturb the financial issues of book publishing agencies.

In conclusion, although we cannot deny the upsides of online storage, this tendency still remains some negative actions that have enormous repercussions to life of people.

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In the age of technological advances, individuals are prone to keep an amount of information and knowledge on the internet platforms, instead of containing in some materials(1) such as books. In my point view, this trend may cause more aftermaths problems rather than benefits it brings to human’s life.

It is non-undebatable that there are heaps of upsides in terms of saving data online. First of all, internet users can access to more modern and effective facilities and new methods of learnings through cutting edge technologies. Unlike books, the utilize standard use of images and sounds may create a sense of excitement and greater motivation as well as holding a learners’ attention while adopting tips that make the process of studying turn to be more efficient. In addition, storing knowledge on the internet is considered to be the cheapest and convenient method. Due to time flexibility, all life of works are permitted to collect their own data immediately from numerous sources such as Google Chrome, Firefox by clicking a mouse.

On the contrary, the ability of online storage may lead to some significant results. It is worth mentioning that nowadays many much bad news still dominates the headlines. a heading line for a whole time. Thus, some fake websites may offer customers readers with an abundance of inaccurate and unreliable information on the internet which causes detrimental effects on the foundation of instructions.(2) Besides, along with saving data online is there are also the potential risks of cybercrimes. Because of personal demands, many prestigious websites are willing to violate the invasion of copyright from other different sources that they disturb the financial issues of book publishing agencies.(3)

In conclusion, although we cannot deny the upsides of online storage, this tendency still remains some negative actions that have enormous repercussions to life of people's lives.

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